Tuesday 30 August 2016

New WWE Universal Champion

It's been a hectic couple of weeks where WWE Raw's new "Universal Championship" is concerned. The Championship debuted at Summerslam when Finn Balor beat Seth Rollins to become the first WWE Universal Champion. And, unfortunately, Balor got injured, so his title reign became less than a day, and WWE had to scrap any plans they had for his run, and come up with something interesting to work with in the title picture.

Luckily they haven't dissappointed. This week was a fatal four way elimination match to determine the new champion, between Kevin Owens, Big Cass, Roman Reigns, and Seth Rollins. The match ended with a controversal, but interesting, end. Triple H came back to pedigree Reigns and give the pin to Seth, eliminating Reigns. Big Cass had already been eliminated at this point. Then, when it seemed like Triple H was going to either (a) Pedigree Owens and give Seth the second pin to let Seth win, or even (b) Get these two to fight it out because either way it's win/win right? He instead turns on Seth, giving the victory to Owens. The new universal champion is Kevin Owens.

People have been expecting Triple H to turn on Seth for a long time now, and set up a fued between them, however that was a long time ago, and I think that expectation died out, so much so that it was unexpected tonight. There's plenty of reason for this turn as well, with Seth having constantly needed the help of the Authority and, despite beating Reigns, failing to keep the WWE title, and then losing the Universal title to Balor. It'll be interesting to see if Owens becomes Triple H's new 'guy', which would work well, or if they'll keep away from that angle, leave Owens to it, and just concentrate on the now nicely set up fued between Triple H and Rollins. However, it'll also be interesting to see how Reigns factors in to all this. Triple H cost him his shot as well. Does this set up a Triple H, Reigns, and Rollins fued, or does Reigns get to be the challenger for Owen's title?

Also, if Owens gets to keep the title for multiple fueds, Kevin Owens vs Sami Zayn for the WWE Universal Championship? Has to happen. Will Owens stay heel or eventually turn face? Either way, despite the temporary loss of Finn Balor, Raw has managed to become interesting again.

Friday 12 August 2016

Broken World Chapter 6

Chapter 6 of Broken World is finally written! This one is quite a bit longer than the others, with a lot more content. The introduction to the story is coming to an end, with interesting events unfolding now. Enjoy! If you like it then please follow my blog to keep up-to-date!

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                Edwin and Seymour were sat together, watching a video on a gigantic screen in what looked to be some sort of preparation room, similar to the one Edwin had been in before his fight with the scarily humanoid demon. On the screen was a video playing of people wearing what at first looked like some sort of black ops military gear, but Edwin recognised it as the custom made clothing used for battling demons, made out of a material made from the demons’ own remains, created to be protective against them where other materials would not be. They were fighting a large group of humanoid demons. At first it looked like absolute chaos, but Edwin could tell that the team were working well in cohesion to efficiently take out the demons. When one went after one of their team, someone would use that distraction to take it swiftly down with a knife. From watching closely Edwin realised that they weren’t giving the team much trouble at all. While they were ferocious and terrifying, they were also predictable in their primitive, violent behaviour.



                A scream ruined the practiced rhythm that seemed to be leading the team to victory. The video switched to another camera, and truly monstrous creature could be seen. It also looked humanoid, to a degree. It had to have been 15 feet tall, with monstrously large arms and hands. It held one of the team members in its grip. He was trying to break free but to no avail. A member of the team stepped forward. He was wearing a more armoured version of the clothing, making him stand out more than the others, and, presumably, offering him more protection. Glowing symbols appeared in the air before him then shot towards the monster. As they closed in they shifted into the form of golden, glowing chains, and wrapped themselves around the creature. As soon as they made contact it dropped the man it was holding, who immediately threw a device at the creature’s face that exploded in a flash. It didn’t seem to do any damage, but Edwin imagined it must’ve blinded the demon.



                Then, as the creature flailed around, weighed down by the chains and presumably temporarily blind, the man in the more armoured clothing pointed towards it, and everyone else on the team backed away. An animal ran into the line of the camera and ran towards the monster. Edwin tried to work out what it was. It looked like some sort of lion, as unlikely as that seemed, but it had an unearthly glow about it, and across it’s fur were lines of red and yellow, giving it the appearance of being on fire. The lion-like animal jumped for the creature’s neck and bit in deep. The monster thrashed around but slowed down more and more. It started to burn, starting from the location that the lion was biting at, and eventually it fell down, lifeless, with flames sprouting from parts of its body.

                Then the video was switched off, bringing Edwin back to reality.
                “There we go. You just watched a real battle between a team of custodians and a group of demons. Caught on CCTV, funnily enough. CCTV can capture demons on video, but the same concept works as in real life; if people don’t believe or even know about them, they can’t see them even on the video. We still try to confiscate as much as we can though, just in case we get people wondering why there are people dressed up throwing flash bangs around and shooting things.” Seymour explained.

                More scary than the video was the fact that Edwin wasn’t particularly shocked at the video. He’d seen enough demons in real life now, trying to kill him. Seeing it on video, especially watching a team of professionals take it down seemingly effortlessly, with no casualties, was actually quite relaxing.

                “Alright then.” Edwin replied. “So then, those symbols again, the ones that you used. What are they? Also what was that creature that killed the demon at the end?”

                “The more you know the better I guess. The symbols, like the ones I used, are what we call the Asura Arts. Explaining exactly what they are is a very long story. But, to put it simply, it’s like a form of magic that exists, that some people can use. It takes a long time to learn how to use it, but once you can it’s very useful. It can do things such as creating chains to immobilize a demon, or even go as far as doing what I used it for; to actually trap demons away to be summoned at a future time. Part of your training will be to see if you have an aptitude for it or not. As for the beast that you saw… That is one of the mythical creatures that exist in the world, in this world, that normally live in locations inaccessible by humans, or by normal humans anyway. These special creatures have abnormal powers, such as the fire you saw that one using. They can actually damage demons, and some can even take down demons by themselves. There aren’t many people who manage to find and form a bond with these creatures, but those that do are an incredible asset to our organisation, as they are one of our greatest weapons in the fight against demons.”

                Edwin took a few minutes to think through this new information. Demons naturally are invisible to humans. Some of them come in monstrous shapes and sizes, allowing them to kill people easily. They seem to be made out of materials alien to this world, that are naturally hardy against any kind of weapons humanity can make. The only things that are effective against them are weapons made using the same materials that make up their bodies; this material comes in limited supply as we can only gain it from their dead bodies. At the same time, because this material isn’t from this world it doesn’t work the same way materials in our world does. As such the weapons made from it tend to be simple, such as daggers, swords, and such. Guns don’t seem to work because gunpowder doesn’t affect it in the same way it would a normal bullet. Therefor it only gives us incredibly simple weapons and armouring against monstrous creatures. Luckily there are two other ways to even the odds in this fight against demon-kind. The Asura Arts; a kind of magical ability that some people in the organisation can use. This “magic” can affect demons, such as chaining them down, which can then give us the opportunity needed to kill them. The third way of fighting them is through the use of “mythical” creatures such as the lion seen in the video. These animals seem to be able to affect demons in a way that humanity can’t, because of their unique abilities.

                As long as there were ways to combat them, they weren’t as scary as Edwin had first thought, he decided. Then came a knock at the door. Without waiting for an invitation, the door opened, and in came a familiar person.
                “Hey guys” Beatrix greeted them, a cheery smile on her face. “Hope I’m not interrupting anything. But when I heard that you’d brought Edwin into the base I just had to come say hi!”

                Seymour let out a long sigh. Edwin had the feeling that Beatrix constantly bothered him, both here and at school.
                “Actually you showed up at a good time. I’ve just been telling Edwin about the mythical creatures that help us in our fight. Believe it or not, Edwin, Beatrix here is one of those few people that have somehow created a bond with one of them and fights together with them. Is Jotun about, Beatrix? I think having Edwin see one in person would be a good thing.”

                Beatrix beamed at the request.
                “Jotun? He’s always nearby! Just in case, ya know.” She looked around. “Jooootun! Come meet a new friend!” she called. Suddenly Edwin’s hairs were on end as the room went cold. The air swirled around them as if a fierce wind had suddenly found its way indoors.

                Edwin shielded his eyes as the wind started to make them sting, and then as the wind died down he looked around. Standing a couple of feet away from him was a wolf with fur stark white like snow, and eyes as blue as the sky. This wolf was massive. It was easily as tall as he was. It looked straight at him. It sniffed the air, then backed away to stand next to Beatrix.

                Beatrix looked happy at the sight of it, rustling it’s fur. “He seems kinda shy. I think maybe he’s scared of you, Edwin!” she said, giving him a disapproving look.

                “Him? Scared of me?” Edwin felt slightly unnerved at the sight of this gigantic wolf that could probably kill all three of them if it decided to.

                “This is Jotun.” Seymour introduced. “He is a wolf that holds power over cold winds and ice. He’s a great asset in the fight against demons.”

                Jotun pawed the ground nervously, still looking Edwin in the eyes, then the ice cold wind started up again, forcing Edwin to squint his eyes once again. When it had gone, so had Jotun.

                Jotun the ice wolf, huh?

                “You scared him off!” Beatrix accused, pointing a finger at Edwin.
                “Hey now, I didn’t do anything!” Edwin replied. “It’s not my fault your oversized wolf ran off”

                Then, as if to stop any possible argument, a phone went off. It was some cheesy theme song of an old cartoon. Beatrix looked embarrassed for a moment, then took out her phone and answered it. After listening intently for a short while, she replied with “I’ll be there as soon as I can” and hung up the phone.
                “There’s a situation. My team has been called out to fix it. Talk to ya both later!” She gave them a smile and a wave and left. That smile didn’t seem convincing somehow. Edwin turned to question Seymour.

                “Must be a demon.” Seymour answered casually.
                A demon!?
                “Then shouldn’t we be helping her?”
                Seymour laughed in reply.
                “Don’t be silly. You? Help her? Getting a little ahead of yourself aren’t you? She’s got her own team. They work well together. You’d literally be getting in the way. As for me, I’ve got my own business to be doing. Such as showing you around. And when I’m not showing you around, I’m still busy. Unfortunately, we can’t all stop what we’re doing to work together to take on a demon. That’s why we’ve got an organised system in place. Training new people up, as well as developing new weapons, and other important research, is just as important as taking down demons in the first place, since they’ll then make it easier to take down demons in the future, and perhaps one day drive them back for good. Don’t get me wrong though, we never let them go about doing as they please. We always send someone to deal with them, but we can’t afford to send everyone. Unless it’s a special case.” Seymour explained.

                That didn't exactly sound perfect to Edwin, but he had to admit it made sense. Also something about the way Seymour said it made it sound like a much-practiced speech. He most likely had to explain it to new recruits a lot. 

                “Alright I get it” Edwin responded, deciding not to question him about it, and to trust in Beatrix's ability.

*
                Edwin arrived home to the small flat his father paid for quite late that night, for once not encountering any demons. As he readied himself for bed he looked over the items he had received from Seymour.

                He’d been given a set of demon-fighting knifes, as well as another set of armoured clothing. He’d been given a phone as well, password and fingerprint protected. On this phone there were many phone numbers for the organisation. An emergency number for reporting a sighting. A number for the ‘front desk’ , that could then be used to redirect to other numbers, for less immediate problems. It also had Seymour’s, Beatrix’s, and even Melisandre’s work numbers. He’d been given a flare gun with a pack of flares, some flash grenades, and even a gun. Luckily he had a utility belt and harness to carry it all. And, also, luckily, he’d been given an I.D., that was similar to a passport, with his photo in it. Apparently it allowed him to avoid trouble for carrying around otherwise illegal items. It gave police officers enough details to phone their supervisor, who would then find out that they worked for some special force that worked for the government that had permission to carry these things.

                Tartarus. That was the name of the organisation. Seymour had said that they were named after Hell, in order to always keep in people’s minds the war they were fighting, although he didn’t sound completely certain. Custodians were what they were called. Occupation? Custodian. Organisation? Tartarus. Hellish and strange names for a hellish and strange job.

                Edwin looked at himself in the mirror in his bathroom, shocked to see that he still looked exactly the same. He felt very different. His life had completely changed since coming to this school. It felt like the entire world had changed. Monsters are real.

                Suddenly an intense burning sensation hit him, coming from his chest. This had been happening since his fight with the demon. He took off his shirt to take a closer look. In the same spot that Seymour has shot a bullet through him, was a strange black mark, seemingly spreading outward. But Seymour had said that that bullet only affects demons. Edwin didn’t know what to make of that. And he didn’t know if he could tell Seymour or anyone else in the organisation about it. What if there was something demonic about him? It would explain why the demons seemed to always appear around him. But then, shouldn’t the bullet have killed him like it did that demon? Would Tartarus be willing to take that chance? The burning sensation faded after some time, but as Edwin drifted into sleep he had terrible nightmares of flames, of burning, and of demons.

*
                After school the next day Edwin found Seymour in the usual computer room, although he was packing up his belongings in a hurry.
               
                “So.. what’s on the agenda today then?” Edwin asked. Seymour looked at him and paused in thought. He then picked up a very large package from under his desk.

                “I’ve got a very special task for you today, actually, although I can’t come with you today. I’ve been called to some urgent business, and I was wondering what I was going to do with this…. I’ve been working on something new, you see. Something amazing! And since you’re here, and since I can’t do it, I need you to deliver this to Melisandre” Seymour answered. He forced the package into Edwin’s arms.

                “Wait… what? Melisandre? She wasn’t at school today, and I don’t even know where she lives!” he said, as Seymour quickly made for the door.

                “Use your other phone, remember?” Seymour answered, and with that he was gone. Edwin sighed. Right. I can always phone her. He put the very heavy package down on the floor and took out his Tartarus phone and rang her number……..

                “No answer…. Seriously?” Edwin sighed again. Then, as he was looking at his phone, he noticed that underneath her phone number was an email, as well as an actual address. “Woah.” He looked through his other contacts and noticed they all had addresses as well. It made sense when he thought about it, but he hadn’t expected it. He didn’t recognise the street name, however. He looked it up on Gogle Maps, and his shoulders dropped in despair. It was at the very least an hour long journey from the school. And he’d be needing to carry this heavy package. Perhaps he could’ve got a bus or a taxi, but his father had a habit of leaving him an obscenely small amount of money, and because of that Edwin had developed the habit of never spending money unless he absolutely had to. And this journey may be painful, and horrible, but it wouldn’t really hurt him in the end, so he picked up the box, and started his long walk.
*
                The walk ended up taking far longer than an hour. He had to keep checking his phone to avoid getting lost, and the package for Melisandre made it take even longer. Edwin finally came across a fully detached house, seeming like it was further away from the other houses than it should be. After placing down the package, he rang the door. He heard footsteps coming down the stairs and finally someone opened the door.

                Just slightly shorter than Edwin, there stood an Asian male, who looked like he could be the same age as Edwin, or slightly older, or slightly younger. He was wearing strangely simple clothes that didn’t reveal anything about his character. A simple plain grey t-shirt, and black trousers that could be work trousers, or school trousers. The guy before him silently looked him up and down, then asked in perfect English “What do you want?” He had a very guarded expression. Edwin couldn’t read him at all. Yet, somehow, he looked strangely familiar.

                “Is Melisandre in? I’ve got a package for her” Edwin said, motioning to the box he’d lain on the ground. The person at the door looked down at it, then back to Edwin, a slight smirk forming on his face.

                “You a postman?” he asked.

                Edwin could tell that he was being messed with. His eyes narrowed and he sighed.

                “No. I’m a friend from school. And this is a package from another friend.Is this guy from Tartarus? He realised then that there really wasn’t a safe way to find out. Who was this guy living in Melisandre’s house?

                “Friend?” the guy scoffed. “Right. Well she’s not in right now.” He looked back down at the package, then back to Edwin, looking like he was calculating something. “I’ll take a guess that it’s urgent though. She’s training at the moment. Do you know the River Firve? If you take a right at the end of this road, then just keep walking until you find the river. You’ll have to go off-road and follow the river to the left. It’ll eventually lead you into the forest, which will eventually lead you into a clearing. She should be there. If it’s not urgent, however, you can leave it here.” He explained.

                Goddamn that sounds like a really long walk. Seymour said it was urgent…. And I guess it’ll help get me into good shape….

                “Alright” Edwin answered, trying to hold the despair from his voice. “Thanks. I’ll take it to her. See ya.”

                “Bye.” Came the simple reply. The guy closed the door before Edwin had even moved to go. Edwin could hear him running back up the stairs. Not the best first impression. Who is he? Maybe Melisandre will tell me. For some reason he seemed kind of… dangerous…
               
                Edwin looked at the heavy package, looked up and down the street, looking for some kind of miracle. There were none. So, he picked up the box, and started walking.
*
                The directions were good enough. It was getting dark now, but Edwin, walking through the forested area, finally came to a large clearing. It was just light enough still that he could see Melisandre, sitting in the middle of the clearing. It looked like she was meditating. Is this the ‘training’ she’s doing?
               
                Then Edwin noticed something else in the clearing. A creature walking on all fours was stalking a circle around her. Could it be… a demon?

                Deciding to be safe rather than sorry, Edwin dropped the package and sprinted forth.
                “Melisandre!” he shouted, rousing her from her meditation.
                The creature looked his way and hissed.
                “Wait!” Melisandre shouted, reaching out her hand, but it was too late. The creature’s mouth opened and flame spewed forth towards Edwin. They completely enveloped his sight, large enough that he couldn’t dodge out of the way. He shielded his eyes and face with his arms and charged forward. The next thing he knew he was on the ground. He opened his eyes and noticed his clothes were on fire. He quickly smothered the flames out. Somehow, he hadn’t taken any damage, except for his clothes. His shirt had mostly burnt off to reveal the protective clothing underneath, although part of that had also burnt away to reveal the strange mark on his chest.

                He looked up to see Melisandre staring at the mark on his chest, deep in thought. The creature Edwin had seen was perched on her shoulder, much smaller than he’d originally thought it was. It had lizard-like skin with a long tail swishing back and forth. In place of where a mouth would be was a flat beak that made Edwin think of a platypus.

                “This is a Cherufe” Melisandre said, breaking the silence. “It’s a creature from old Chilean mythology. It turns out Cherufe are real. This one is friendlier than most”

                “You call that friendly?” Edwin remarked, getting to his feet.
                Another mythological creature, just like Beatrix’s Jotun. He walked away from her to grab the package and brought it over to her.
                “Here. Seymour said that this was an urgent delivery for you. So I’ve been, well, trying to find you to deliver it” he said.

                “Ah” she said, understanding dawning on her face. She looked away awkwardly. “Sorry for being… hard to find… I guess. It must’ve been a long walk. Still, I wonder why it was so urgent.” She started unpacking the box. Edwin watched, curious to see what was inside. The Cherufe looked up at him and hissed, small flames coming from its mouth. “He thought you were a demon” she explained. “And I wasn’t expecting to be interrupted.”

                He thought I was a demon? What a coincidence.
                The package was revealed to be what looked like a utility vest, and a separate sleeve. The Cherufe jumped to the ground as she put the vest on, and it turned out that the sleeve connected to the vest. There was also a small screen in the middle of the chest, and another screen on the wrist of the sleeve, with various wires that she had to plug in, as well as a small instruction manual.
                “Interesting….” She said, reading through it. She sifted through the box for more parts, revealing what looked like some kind of pipe that went into the arm, looking like a gun, and cables that connected up to it.
               
                “So… what is it?” Edwin asked.
                Then, suddenly, something was different. Edwin felt on edge all of a sudden. Silence. That was it. There was no sound at all. Melisandre seemed to have noticed as well, as they shared a look. The Cherufe jumped back onto her shoulder and hissed, breaking the silence. Edwin realised that the vest seemed to glow for a split second as the Cherufe jumped onto Melisandre’s shoulder. He could have been imagining it, but considering what he’d seen so far, it was more likely that it was real.

                As they looked around a thunderous screech filled the air. It drew their attention to the trees across the clearing. Then, as quietter growls could be heard, a group of demons came running towards them. Edwin recognised them. They were all the same as the demon Seymour had had him fight. Seymour had told him they were one of the weakest types, but also one of the more numerous. They called them Gluttons; in reference to their bloated stomach and urge to feed on flesh. He’d had a hard enough time against one of these, but now… He counted them. There were 6 of them, and there was no way they’d have enough time to get backup from Tartarus. Then a ball of flame exploded in his vision, flying past him and exploding upon one them, sending it to the ground and engulfing it in flames. Edwin heard it scream until it stopped moving completely. Edwin looked to see Melisandre with her arm outstretched. The fire had seemingly come from the weapon on her new sleeve. The Cherufe was sat calmly on her shoulder, it’s eyes closed.

                “This is a good opportunity to test this thing out” she said, smiling. “Don’t worry, we can take these small fry out. Think you can keep them from getting too close to me?”

                Edwin looked back to them. They’d stopped running. They must have somehow noticed that their companion had suddenly died. They were now slowly and carefully closing in. Edwin calmed down. He took off the burnt remains of his shirt, revealing two knives attached to his protective utility undervest. He wasn’t all too confident, but he could at least keep them away from her, he hoped.

                “No problem” he answered, holding a knife in each hand and concentrating on the approaching Gluttons. Melisandre fired another ball of fire towards one of them, but they must be smarter than they look, as it jumped out of the way and the ball of fire went sailing past, exploding on the ground.
                Good job we’re in a clearing.

                After that shot they exploded into a sprint, trying to close the distance before Melisandre’s next shot. Melisandre backed off, putting Edwin in the way. Edwin got ready to tackle any that tried to get past, but was shocked when they all swerved towards him, seemingly not caring about Melisandre. Suddenly he was almost tripping over himself as he jumped out of the way as one of them pounced for him. As the Glutton crashed to the ground it was smothered in flame from Melisandre’s weapon. This time is was shooting out in more of a short-range flamethrower form. Edwin swung his daggers in front of him, cutting a Glutton as he backed away and drawing blood as they closed in. It didn’t deter them, however. Luckily Melisandre backed him up, shooting fire into them from behind, presumably finished with the one on the ground. One of them turned, it’s attention drawn, but Edwin took that chance to move past the other Gluttons and tackle it to the ground before it advanced on Melisandre. Taking cue from the video he’d seen earlier, he drove his knife into its head repeatedly, feeling sick while he did it but finishing it off while it’s attention was drawn. He felt the heat of the fire from Melisandre’s weapon going over his head, pushing the other Gluttons away. Edwin looked up to see her concentrating on the Gluttons in front of her. Then he saw a shadowy figure creeping up on her.

                “Melisandre! Behind!” he shouted. He eyes widened for a moment, then she grabbed something from her vest, threw it above her head and jumped over Edwin. Whatever it was she’d thrown exploded in the face of the Glutton that was creeping up behind her, blowing most of its head off. Melisandre landed near Edwin, but the two remaining Gluttons, although severely burned, came for Edwin. They fell to the ground on top of him, grabbing him and trying to bite his face off with their eerily large mouths, but Edwin kept his calm about him. He stabbed with his knives at their faces, while the air behind them was illuminated with Melisandre’s fire. Eventually the weight on top of him went limp and dead, and he shoved their corpses off.

                Melisandre was back on her feet, looking towards the trees. Edwin got back to his feet.
                “We’re not done.” She warned. She reached into one of her pockets and grabbed Edwin’s hand, pressing something cold into them. Edwin looked down to see what looked like a small shiny rock.

                “This is an ardent stone. My Cherufe makes them. This vest is pretty useful. It directs Cherufe’s energies to make ardent stones materialise within the pockets. Just crack the stone and throw it. It’ll explode like a grenade, but with enough force to actually hurt demons.” Melisandre explained.

                Edwin took a step forward, in front of Melisandre.
                “Let’s keep to the same tactic” he answered to her questioning look. The trees in front of them shook.

                Trees were pushed to the side as another familiar demon pushed its way into the clearing. It was also humanoid, but far too tall. At least fifteen feet in height, this demon actually had eyes unlike the Gluttons. Its arms were also unnaturally long, with gigantic hands. It was just like the demon that Edwin had seen in the video.

                Immediately Melisandre had shot a ball of fire towards it. The demon outstretched its hand towards it and the ball exploded as it made impact. The demon screeched in pain, the same screech they had heard earlier. Its hand was slightly burnt but it didn’t look that harmed, and it ran towards them, using its long arms like a gorilla, faster than its size would have them believe.

                Pushing down the fear that threatened to consume him, Edwin ran forward to meet it. Less confident in his own skill and more confident that Melisandre would find a way to harm it, he would attempt to distract it. Seemingly he needn’t have bothered, for the massive demon went straight for him anyway. It swung its fist towards him, so Edwin stopped running towards it and jumped back, just out of range, but managing to stab his knife into its arm as it went past. The knife dug in but was ripped from his grasp, and the impact of the air after the demon’s swipe knocked him to the floor. The demon screeched, looking at the knife embedded in its arm. It swung its arm again and the knife came flying out, getting lost in the darkness. Edwin quickly got to his feed and ran to the side, an idea coming to mind. It turned with him and moved after him, so that now Melisandre was behind it. A flaming ball hit it in the back and exploded, sending it to one knee. This time it actually turned towards Melisandre. It’s back had burn marks on it, but again it didn’t look very damaged. Realising that it was about to go after Melisandre, Edwin ran towards it. As it took a step Edwin jumped and grabbed a hold of its leg, big enough that he could wrap his legs around it and it took him with it, moving into a run. At its speed it would get to Melisandre in mere seconds, and Edwin wouldn’t have been fast enough to catch up.

                He shuffled himself up the leg, and with his remaining knife swung his outstretched arm and stabbed the demon in its stomach area. It stopped mid-stride, Melisandre only a few metres away. Edwin yanked the knife back towards him, ripping open its stomach. It screeched again as blood came pouring out. Suddenly Edwin was ripped from its leg, suspended in the air. It had grabbed him by the legs and he was hanging upside down, looking down at its face. Seconds away from a sure death, Edwin managed to remain calm. Inside his hand he had the stone Melisandre had given to him. He gripped it as hard as he could and felt a crack, then threw it at the demon’s eyes. They exploded and the demon roared in anger, dropping Edwin as it brought its hands to its eyes.

                It seemed as if Melisandre had caught onto his plan, for as he fell he noticed her running past him. She shoved the muzzle of her weapon into the open wound that Edwin had created, turned away as much as she could, and Edwin saw a bright flash inside the creature’s stomach as she shot fire into it. Edwin immediately ran and grabbed a hold of her, pulling her with him as he jumped to the side, just in time to avoid the demon’s fist ramming into the ground where she had just been. It fell to its knees and arms, trying to look around with its blinded eyes, smoke rising from its midsection. In desperation to end this as quickly as possible, just in case it wasn't done, Edwin ran towards it and stabbed his knife into its head. Its head was big, and it knocked him away as it tried to move in pain, but the knife stuck in, and it fell down from its knees and arms, flat on the ground, and stopped moving.

                Edwin stood there in silence, catching his breath. When he turned around he saw that Melisandre had a phone to her ear. The Cherufe had jumped off her shoulder and was running around the clearing. Edwin guessed it was checking to make sure there was nothing else nearby. Melisandre reported, presumably to Tartarus, that there had been an ‘incident’ and that they needed a ‘clean up’.

                “They’ll be here soon to debrief us and harvest the bodies” she explained. Edwin nodded in acknowledgement. “You know….” She said, seeming like she was sure how to word something.

                “What?” Edwin asked, curious.

                “When you were in the hospital I said that you shouldn’t join us, that you should try to live an ordinary life. But… you were pretty useful just then. Maybe you joining wasn’t such a bad idea.” She said, trying hard to keep her face and tone serious.

                Edwin smiled. It was good to hear. When he thought about it, today was the most they’d ever spoken. She wasn’t easy to approach at school, and she had always seemed short with him. Perhaps things were changing now that he’d ‘proven’ himself, so to speak.

                “However.” She said, her tone suddenly very serious. “That mark on your chest. We need someone to check it out.”

                “What, this?” Edwin said, trying to sound aloof. “This isn’t anything special. It’s just a… mark. It’s fine” he said, not really sure how to try to convince her. It wasn’t something he could say was a tattoo. He wasn’t old enough to even get a tattoo. Plus it looked too strange. But this, Seymour’s bullet, and the fact that demons kept turning up around him. It was something to worry about. What if Tartarus designated him as a ‘demon’ and killed him?

                Melisandre somehow seemed to sense his worry.
                “Don’t worry. Those marks aren’t anything demonic.” She said. “They look like Asura Arts… And it looks like it protected you from Cherufe’s flames. Perhaps somebody put a charm on you or something.” Her words put Edwin’s mind at ease. When could that have happened? He wondered. Maybe it was best to get it looked into.

                “Thanks” he replied. As they waited for the ‘clean up’ crew to arrive, they got to talking about mythical creatures and the items Seymour had made for Melisandre. Apparently the vest and arm-piece drew on Cherufe’s powers and concentrated them into the gun on the arm, as well as speeding up the process of the creation of ardent stones and making them materialise in the pockets of the utility vest for easy access. According to Melisandre it was something only a genius would be able to make, as it actually channels the power of Cherufe, something that should be impossible with human technology. She guessed that it made use of demonic materials and perhaps Asura Arts, but she couldn’t be sure. She’d have to ask Seymour about it. Edwin just listened happily, noticing how her red hair complemented the fire she wielded. He forgot to ask her about the Asian boy in her house, and soon enough members of Tartarus arrived to harvest the bodies of the demons, and escorted them back to the base underneath the school to debrief them.
*
                “Well, I’m glad they didn’t notice me.” The woman said, talking to no-one in particular as she walked through the forest, heading back to the city. “Still though, I just don’t know why they keep going after that boy from the hospital. From my point of view that girl looked tastier.” She said, thinking about it but coming to no conclusions. She took out a small makeup kit and looked at herself in the mirror, checking her makeup. It was still fine. She hadn’t exactly needed to exert herself. She looked around. It wasn’t as if any animals were going to come near her. And if any of the agents of the organisation found her…. She smiled as she caught a glimpse of one of the massive demons walking near her. They held a formation at her command, with her at the centre. Anyone that inadvertently walked their way would get ripped to pieces in seconds.

                “He certainly has changed from only a short time ago though. It seems like he’s got his fear under control, and he was showing some good movements for such a young boy back there. Still, perhaps next time I should just have him eaten. If I’m not going to find out the mystery around him maybe I should just have him gone. I can’t have anything getting between me and the organisation…..” She caught herself squinting in anger in her mirror, and closed it, putting it back in her pocket. She hurried her pace. She didn’t want to get caught just yet. She shouldn’t really have visited the boy back at the hospital, but she couldn’t control her curiosity, just like this time.
 

Thursday 11 August 2016

Beyond Human

So I'm going to be starting a project called Beyond Human.

It's going to be a superhero-based world. It may also involve magic, aliens, and such. It should be pretty interesting, so keep watching this space, so to speak. I'm most definitely going to carry on writing Broken World. I've still got a lot of plans to carry out for that story. But I'm also quite invested in my idea for a story based around super powers. I'm going to be doing something different for Beyond Human, however. Before going into the main story I'm planning on doing some short stories for some of the characters, to explore the individual important characters and the setting, before then going on to the main story. So I'm going to be working on these prequel chapters while also writing chapter 6 of Broken World, which is almost done now. Should be out in a day or two.

Beyond Human will be a darker take on the superhero genre, however, which I'm looking forward to writing. Hopefully people will enjoy it.

I'll also be carrying on writing about stuff like movies, games, and wrestling every now and again, just because, you know, they're also my interests. If you don't enjoy them then fair enough. It's just me getting my thoughts and ideas out there.

Also in about a month, maybe two, I'm going to be trying to get a youtube channel up and going. Going to be a gaming playthrough channel, so if you like watching Let's Plays / game playthroughs then you might enjoy it.

Tuesday 9 August 2016

A Suicide Squad Review

So Suicide Squad recently came out, and of course, as a comic book fan, I went to watch it. I haven't been enjoying DC stuff recently, such as Batman V Superman, although the trailer for Wonderwoman does look pretty awesome. The trailer for Justice League simply looks like, well, Batman going around recruiting the Justice League. Aquaman is a drunk ruffian, so that might be interesting. It won't be directed by Zack Snyder, so it might be good.


Now, back to Suicide Squad. The movie starts out well. We get a brief and enjoyable intro to our individual villains as they eventually get forced together to fight against suicidal odds to most likely die, but, perhaps, survive and save mankind in the process. If they refuse, or run, they get killed. The idea behind what the Suicide Squad is in the comics comes across very accurately in the movie.

Now, people have said that the team of villains don't really come across very well as villains, and well, that's very true. In the comics of 2011 we had Sharkman eating people, and although Killer Croc is teased as having eaten people, it doesn't actually happen. We don't really get the opportunity to get the idea reinforced in our head that these guys are all  villains. Harley Quinn steals a bag from a store, that feels like a very forced scene that doesn't sit well as being really that villainous compared to mass murder.

The main character of this film is undoubtedly Deadshot, and he is a very cool character in this movie, and even relatable. He is nowhere near as coldhearted as he is in the comics. We have a scene where he has a chance to kill Harley, and if he does he'll be freed and have full custody of his daughter. Realistically, even from what we'd seen from him in the movie so far, he would and should have done it. But a moment of kindness takes hold over him and he misses his shot. This should leave us going "Aw, he's not such a bad guy after all." Instead it leaves us wondering "Why?" Apparently he doesn't kill women or children. Even so, from what we know about his character, he still should have done it.

Speaking of Harley, one big part of this movie is Harley and Joker's relationship. Unlike the comics, and perhaps this is a good thing, while Harley and Joker are still, undeniably, insane, and murderers, and while it is obvious that Harley loves Joker, it seems that in actuality Joker actually loves Harley too. In the movieverse anyway. I've always viewed the Joker as not caring in the least about Harley. Not now, not ever. It's a horrible relationship, and it's meant to be. However, for good or for bad, in the movieverse it actually seems Joker cares a lot about Harley. Rather than her being his pawn, it seems like he sees her as someone who shares in his insanity. The only person in the world. The film leaves me very much hoping for a batman movie with Joker and Harley.

There is of course Rick Flag, and the Enchantress, and some others like Croc, Boomerang, Katana. However the film very much seems set up to set up Deadshot and Harley for future movies, and although I don't like to say it, the other characters aren't really worth talking about. 

Overall I enjoyed this movie. I thought it was pretty good, or good enough anyway. It wasn't amazing. Leto's Joker wasn't amazing. Harley wasn't amazing. Deadshot wasn't amazing, although he was very cool. It wasn't all that dark for a film based on murderous villains. It was kind of like a very very lighter version of the comic book version of Suicide Squad, and that's not necessarily a bad thing. It was enjoyable, and it left me looking forward to a Suicide Squad 2. There's even a brief appearance by the Flash that leaves me wanting to see him soon.

Suicide Squad managed to stay the movie it was meant to be, while also setting up future DC movie-verse films, without becoming a mangled mess like Batman V Superman. In the list of DC Movie-verse movies so far, Suicide Squad, for me, is the best so far. But, unfortunately, there really isn't much competition. I didn't exactly enjoy it or get as invested in it as... say... Guardians of the Galaxy. But for a DC film is wasn't so bad. Would I watch it again? Yes. Would I watch it three times? No. Here's hoping Wonder Woman will be great, and that Justice League won't be terrible.